FuxJustAWord
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This was feedback posted for The Revelation
IP:
werd.................. nice battle, i thought someone might come with some vampire wordplay in it...... but meh, i think that Soul dropped really really weak until the last bar that really brought the whole thing to gether, but u were kinda weak until than...... i dont really like the hook in revs it should flow and rhyme alil better to be a hook but u get ur point across....... thisll be a toughy i think
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