View Single Post
Old 08-03-05, 02:56 PM   #7
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
Posts: 7,092
From: Chitown
This was feedback posted for The Revelation

IP:

werd.................. nice battle, i thought someone might come with some vampire wordplay in it...... but meh, i think that Soul dropped really really weak until the last bar that really brought the whole thing to gether, but u were kinda weak until than...... i dont really like the hook in revs it should flow and rhyme alil better to be a hook but u get ur point across....... thisll be a toughy i think
__________________

...The real Renegade before Hova...