Since It Was Multi Mania...i guess yu were going for multis??....

If thats the fact...heres my break down:

go for more than one word end rhymes....try to make two words Rhyme at the end....and, go for multi syllable rhymes....i seen yu do some of it...but, other parts had one syllable rhymes......if yu work on that, yu'll be str8 in multis

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