ok man I liked ur multies nice stuff, but it was a lil too short for me I think u coulda wrote more and made it hella good. But overall nice everything so I give it a 5/10 good stuff but make it more lively with emotion and imagery man. Good stuff though...please return the feedback on my OM's

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