Souljah - Overall I wasnt really feeling where you went with the topic. You could have been alot more indepth with it you know. The flow was choppy for the most part, and the vocab was average. Anything that could have help would have been creativity. But this was just another verse to me you know... Keep workin on things, you will elevate ...

King Solo - This was decent... I liked how you tried to use that vocab and make it more of a mature subject. But it wasnt to creative, i could see alot of people doing this topic this way... The rhyme was decent, choppy in a couple spots but not to bad. If anything I liked the close the most. It was a good way to release it. It was also a very realistic piece, shit like that is apart of the real life... it was pretty good work...

vote - King Solo

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