Shodown - Even with your situation, im going to act as if nothins going on with you... I felt it was kinda weak, but I notice how you try and bring some vocab in there. Maybe next time be a lil more creative and extend the lines more so you can bring out a stronger rhyme scheme... you know, it was decent... but I felt could have been alot better for the topic.

Daubs - This was accually pretty decent for being rushed like you said it was. The creativity wasnt all there, but your imagery was very nice. Your structure was nice, and the flow was good as well. Nothing incredable, but still went well... I also felt you could have came alot more creative still with the topic. Thats a bad ass topic, lol... well, decent work...

Vote - Daubs

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