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Old 08-06-05, 03:13 PM   #14
E.C
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listening as i type:

beat is illl.... wow... theres no emotion what so ever.. that needs to be worked on. flow is good but your mumbling. work on your emotion and delivery. coz i think its boring and people will turn it off before they hear the rest of your verse

hook is ight but no emotion and got no effect so people might not fink its a hook..


second dude same no emotion flow is ight though cant hear the lyrics.. raise the vocals.

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