i think u should rap the same way u were talkin in the beginnin........ theres sumthin that happens to ur voice wen u started rappin..... i unno, but besides that this is pretty good...... maybe u just gotta work on ur breathin i guess.... "TC...... Fux u"

thats how u woulda spelt it, right???

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