dope battle.

spoken: i like the twist you pulled of with this piece. it worked real well. emotion was nice. imagination was dope. vocab was decent flow was on point and your structure was good... overall i was feeling your piece alot. good job fam.

daemon: ok.. where do i start. umm there was something about yours that didn't wuite connect. i didn't really enjoy reading it, it was too packed out with too many things i think you tried too hard on this, vocab was real nice though. your piece was interesteing to read but not a fun pieice to read it didnt really keep me interested thats why im gonig with spoken word sorry man...

v/ spoken word

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