dont know why its so short......up on vocab, structure, multis, ya no ....not bad concept here but ur rhymes was really basic im not hating just tellin u wuts real......and u try to make ur words rhyme to much

"Pistol, me n my niggaz manish/
so don't trip like you got ur balance/"

tried to hard....ease up let it flow, elevate and keep it real.......RTF on my om's or possibly battles....1