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Old 08-08-05, 02:24 PM   #1
king slimm
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my pistol

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check dis out-
Pistol, me n my niggaz manish/
so don't trip like you got ur balance/
cuz i let the gun cock like roosters/
wake up ya blok like motor scooters/
i fire the gun like u sleepin on the job/
floss jewels yellow like corn on the cob/
u flossin get robbed thank u maam/
my heart cold as the hands of an ice cream/
if i ain there to defend then my dudes got em/
cock back and bust like orgasm/
u leakin need aid but ya bitch got snatched/
how stupid could u be its a dollar a jimmy hat/
my niggaz 'll take ya wig bk lika refund/
hit the warehouse n re-up on guns/
niggaz don kum side wayz on my soil/
beef u don want nun like da meats spoiled/
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Old 08-08-05, 02:31 PM   #2
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No. You've never had sex and you've never had a pistol. You suck, elevate like crazy.
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Old 08-08-05, 02:33 PM   #3
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fuck u Square get Two-pieced cuzzo
give me real feed back not buster responses
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Old 08-08-05, 03:38 PM   #4
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uppin for sum respones frum sum turf niggaz not no bitch-made geekz
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Old 08-08-05, 04:54 PM   #5
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dont know why its so short......up on vocab, structure, multis, ya no ....not bad concept here but ur rhymes was really basic im not hating just tellin u wuts real......and u try to make ur words rhyme to much

"Pistol, me n my niggaz manish/
so don't trip like you got ur balance/"

tried to hard....ease up let it flow, elevate and keep it real.......RTF on my om's or possibly battles....1
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