Ight...this was a good peice overall

Flow-Flow,for the most part,stayed constant throughout the song.Only problem was the basic rhyme shceme.Read the tutorials to find out about multis and rhyme shceme.Cause,in honesty,your style of rhyming is generic.One syllable rhyming doesn't cut it anymore.

Content-This was where your song shined.I was actually cruising through it when I read it.Didn't really get bored and such.You got the ideas and concepts on what to say.But.....
vocabulary could be stepped up a bit.And you need some more complexity.So bassically,all in all,you have what it is you want to say...but you need to find a better way to put it together.Try some metaphors and upp your vocab.

As for the hook
I been searchin through time to try to find
the most emotional rapper ever alive
and all ends points, point to one white boy
not tupac, or biggie just some white boy
^^when i first read these lines....i thought you were makin a eminem dickridin song...until I saw the other 2 lines...which said it was about you....LOL

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203668
^^If you don't mind voting...as I took time to read your work