Voted For: T.r.oo.P

Troop
WOW....this was a good peice.At first,at beggining,I was like..what the fuck is this man talking about?But when the end came,I realized you were talking about suicide.DOPE concept here.As for the wording,it was ight.....not perfect though...could use some improvement.Just try to make it so the lines appear to made for each other.Your vocabulary was nice.So was flow.Those a more complex rhyme shceme would be nice.

Still Motion
Umm....your wording was horiible.You were all over the place.It was a mess.Vocabulary is good thing when used correctly...but I felt you used it bad.Also...you shoulda made it longer to try to describe it more.Big words alone doesn't make it dope.

Vote-Troop
RTF BELOW PLEASE
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