Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Your text stinks yo, even your audio mic tosses fresh mints
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Originally Posted by Kon’s crew
Rep us in your sig.
They said SIG, you misunderstood what the establish meant!
^^didn't rhyme homie...punch was weak...2/10
This battle is a Godsend, seriously easy win to seal
Yeah, I rewind your tracks…..playing with hot wheels
^^flowed bad and punch sucked...2/10
It’s ironic to think, another kon is behind tough bars…
Only time his line’s are on point, when he types an exclamation mark!
^^c'mon man...rhyme...played and basic punch too...2/10
You belong in the dark, with a leash, and maybe a shock collar
Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers!
^^vets ride his dick?..more like a complement...2/10
I could stop this right now, the war against bacteria would end today
Drop the mic, but with your bad breath… it would probably run away!
^^PLAYED OUT SINCE 1993...bad breath?

OK...structure was OK.Flow sucked badly.Had too many lines that didn't rhyme.mint/meant....collar/ballers...mark/bars?...NO.As for punches...you need more concepts.That last bar...bacteria/bad breath?...need more creativity

Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me..
This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy..
^^PLayed and basic...2/10
Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves..
Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves..
^^Reeves lines are played..but punch ight..4/10
Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man..
Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams..
^^No punch....1/10
Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B...
My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy..
^^no punch...stop talkin bout yaself and diss..0/10
I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch..
...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch..
^^OK.....3/10

OK...structure was Nice.Flow was meh?...had a basic rhyme scheme.Punches lacked...but at least they were better than the other guy to give you the win.But here wat...next time use more creativity.You too basic and shit.And don't self glorify so much.

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