Voted For: Reflekt
i'll battle this faggot..but let me tell you that you'll never be respected
cause the only way you'll be a 10 is if you multiplied your record*
^^ok.....5/10
if we were golfing its possible that they'd say you might be good
the way your skillz stay under par like you was tiger woods
^^kinda played.....3/10
all of my punches will hit you good..even if i miss your left and hit your right eye
tried to be cool with you for a second but now "theres no more mister nice guy"**
^^wat's with the **?...2/10
my lyrics are like firearms..thats why they say i'll put the teks(text) on you
the only reason you'd be any good is the simple fact that my skillz reflekt on you
^^techs/text lines played and no punch...2/10
OK...a mediocre verse.Flow was ight.That 1st bar rhymed a little iffy.As for your punches..well they were ight.1st bar was probably your best one.2nd bar with the golfing/up par was played.3rd was weak.4th...tech/text is played and there was no punch because you self glorifing.So just up your creativity up and shit.And don't put that "quick key" anymore.That's just an excuse people make when they drop a weak verse.Either come strong...or don't come.SO next time..do'n't put "quick key"
Re-flekt, cmon nigga, u wanna beef? then u'll meet-tecs
if you dont wanna get ya T (t shirt) wet, then u betta show me sum re-spect
^^This was self glorifing..no punch..1/10
beatin this bitch ass nigga will be my proposition
act slick, then ur right cheek will be my glocks position
^^again...where's the punch?...0/10
im equipped wit the beam, play hard then its clips u receive
u betta have a fuckin vest on, actin like your christopher reeve
^^reeve lines are played...1/10
the tone'll melt ya chin, soon as the heat meets ya cheek
and itll have ya face hanging over ya neck like a jesus piece
^^no punch....2/10
OK...wat's up with the self glorifing and the killing lines.Diss homie.Don't fuckin use that shit.It's ok to use it as a set-up or filler or something...but not as a punch.Punch is for dissing and that only.Only punch you had was that reeves one...and reeve lines are played.
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