Voted For: Stanza
ummm this was a prettty weak battle.
narc: there was reakky no punhes in your verse. well none that stuck out. you need to use better vocab and better concepts/ your structure was pretty mest up ad your flow was all over the place.
stanza weak verse but you did what you needed to do. punches vocab flolw and structure were asll better thats why im giving it to you.
v/ stanza
for having better vocab punches flow and structure pz
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