Voted For: Kamze

Kamze da only way u gonna win if its luck
i'm not hatin but man u suck
^^wtf?....this as basic as it gets.....0/10
u against me is a Ffsh to a whale
u already lost is the tru story i tell
^^omg....0/10
Nngga u not eatin u need to pick yo weight up
unlike me im full cause u just got ate up.
^^no punch...0/10

Ok...0/10 for the whole verse.Go read the tutorials cause apperantely you don't know what a punch is.You can't go stating..."ooh..you suck"...and expect to get a responce.It's like you did that in 2 minutes...c'mon man...do better.Get creative and shit.

Thank god i ain't battlin you face to face, otherwise you'd be able to look at my butt,
Cuz, everyone on RV know, that your favourite meal ......... is 'Sausage and nuts',
^^OK...kinda sucked tho....4/10
If you read the last four letters of 'his name', it definds what he is, and that's a 'sise',
Cuz i had to ask him twice, or maybe more, just to get him too battle me,
^^^set-up was ite...punch sucked....3/10
This guy makes me homophobic, cuz hes like a 'leaf', he's always blowin around,
I can see right threw his plans, and next moves, like he was wearin a lingerie night gown.
^^OK...1st line played....2/10

OK...your verse slowly got worse as it went on.1st bar was an ite meta...but kinda gay too.2nd bar was weak.3rd wasn't much of a punch.Work on your set-ups too.Upp your flow.Structure is good.Just make your punches better.

Vote-Kamze
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