Voted For: DoContinue

ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
^^^coulda made a better play off his name man....but it's ight...5/10
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
^^didn't rhyme well.....ight punch....5/10
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
^^basic ........3/10
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
^^basic...........2/10

OK...your verse got worse and worse as ut went.The first bar with the DOknot Continue rapping was ight...but coulda been better.The 2nd was ight punch but didn't rhyme well.3rd was basic.4th was even more basic.You can't just say "i heard better from andy watever" and expect to get positive reactions.

this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.
^^not much of a punch....1/10
seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane
^^Good...4/10
mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment
^^this was dope..Lisp..wi-tire....9/10
couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.
^^Ok....5/10

Ok...1st bar was whack as fuck.2nd was mediocre...but that 3rd bar was dope.Complexity and creativity at best.
Flow was choppy at times.Set-ups could use some improvement...but you got this battle easy.

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