Voted For: MaRVJay1009

If Marv was Amerikas Nightmare then i guees no one will be Scared
Cause he dosent bring much to the Table like a DJ thats Unprepeared
^^Ok.....6/10
Marv has a worst chance in beating me than a monkey going to Mercury
Only way his words will be Radio Active is if hes involved in Chemo Therapy
^^set up was gay....4/10
U is str8 trash with the punches u better of with rhymes that are Nursery
Cuz Batteling me your risking you like your bitch ass is going into surgery
^^not much of a punch....2/10
This nigga is killing me cuz im dying of Bordem but u just a lonley Orpahn
In this Forum Ill make ur Net Carrer Fade Away like an ol Micheal Jordan
^^meh....basic and weak...3/10
In "Brokllyn" Ima taking the Gold you aint even taking "Bronze" yes Im KIng
"Island" punches to this "Queen" or this "Man~Hattin" and make sure that I Win
^^Good....7/10

OK..a good verse here.1st bar was ight.2nd was ok..except for the set-up.3rd was not a punch.It was more of you saying one of those "I"ma kill you" lines.4th was a lil iffy...kinda too weak for my liking.4th was probably your best line.Flow was good...so was structure.Just make all your bars punches,work on set-ups,and your on ur way.

whut label a sign u bitch?,but as for all dem lines u spit.
its like you "lost with medicine" cuzz i dont "find u sick".
^^Played..medicine/sick...no...2/10
who's nice in r.a.w? no nigga u in ya wack squad truley.
yea we know his name but has any eva seen narc's uzi?
^^Good...worded nice too.....6/10.
i got killa's & they clap......so narc u betta stay strap's.
or like da "ocean goin opposite" they a push ya "waves-back".
^^meh.....4/10
nun of ya bars sicker than mine...u pussy so y pistol or nine.
ima grab a knife & "cut-u" but nah narc i aint "skip you in line".
^^OK......4/10
u aint da type da key verse..u da grab ya pen & note pad guy.
i aint gon keep it on da "low" it still look like u wrote dat "high".
^^OK....5/10
you getin a KO..OK? even dem fags in ya corny ass click know.
u can "look outside from ya crib" but dis u aint gon "win-tho".
^^Best bar here.....8/10

OK....aside from the 1st pad...none of the punches were bad.I think you really stayed consistant with your punches moreso that NArc did.Flow was good here as you had internals and such.your best lines were the nameplay and window/wind-tho one.


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