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Old 08-11-05, 05:28 PM   #34
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Voted For: Stanza

stanza's verse was short and to the point... it was clear disses and you knew exactly what he was talkin about... on the other hand, natural killa's lines were WAAAAAY to complex... dont get me wrong, i understood every line but all of nats lines were stretched and the wordplay was really forced... like his opener about as-nats... it really brought down ur verse... sorry nat, i wasnt really feeling any of your lines except for the line about the leader being the worst in the crew, i thought it was amusing although lines like that are played to fuck....
nothing really stood out in stanza's verse, it just wasnt completely wack. none of his punches or lines connected at all because he also had a cuppla played concepts (crack in pocket) and forced word play ( WTF at the exed L line...).
the only reason Stanza gets this vote is because his punches werent so complicated... he was short and to the point, making it a better text read
V/ Stanza