Good man, wasnt really fealin it thouht u had decent multis.....good rhyme scheme gangsta concept.....but up on ur vocab.....make it elevate as ur verse goes along makes in more enjoyable to read.........ummmm....structure wasnt on...didnt catch a good flow, make sure all ur lines end up at the same spot.....
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