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Old 08-13-05, 10:21 AM   #4
E.C
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aww i fink dis beat is ill.... lol would be dope wit some songing in it.


your vocals are pretty loud, emotion aint dat good needs work,. u got potential though. lyrics are ite. hook is kool. delivery needs work aswell. like the hook.. no second verse? ite your talking,pretty decent track man, u need a better mic quality aint that good... u basically jus talk fr the rest of the verses. last verse was ite. need more emtoino tho and better mic presence. uva than that its ite. jus work on those fings pz
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