Voted For: Daubs

>This kid actin like he hard man u kno u wack alone
Wonderin y this bitch is scared he hides behind tha phone
meh, nothing creative 4/10
>Daubs? U painted ur picture wrong u mustve not had a lamp
Cuz ur like Jews ill leave u in the fuckin “Concentration” camp
uhhmm, if you need that much explanation for a punch, its not effective...2/10
>And u kno u aint neva hot cuz u allergic of the sun witout a tan
Cuz u playing soccer when u bring special deliveries like a pizzaman
nothing special 4/10

overall: 10/30....nothing creative in here man, you kinda just took his pic, but you kinda just stated the obvious....and that 2nd bar was just stupid, it was okay.....but tried to hard with it man....uhmm, advice? come up with better/more witty concepts.....cause that verse was just basic at best.....no hate yo.

>I been here almost twice as long, and still got less posts than you..
But still your skills got more tacky edges..............than posters do..
i actually like this punch, made me laugh 6/10
>And sins-here.........nor there, he just aint sure about his sexuality..
Just watch me take his spinal chord...and snap him back into reality..
set up was meh, okay punch 4/10
>This is a two man race, and you wouldnt be ahead..by biting your cock..
I see your interests are writing,me too,look...........im writing you off..
not bad, enjoyed it 5/10

overall: 15/30......not bad, had the right ideas with punches, first bar was good, creative, original......last two, concepts have been done before, but still, not bad, wording was good, creative.....flowed nice........not too bad of a battle here, but daubs defined the win here.......and no hate, honest vote.........keep up to both

v/daubs

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