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Old 08-16-05, 08:46 AM   #2
Payn
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diz was a nice piece here ma i like ur concept, vocab was on point, structure was up 2 par, & basically in diz 1 here i felt were u r coming from & had plenty of dayz were i felt tha same way creativity, & originality is wut i like bout ur pieces d.q but overall diz is good work keep writing 9.5/10
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