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Old 08-17-05, 06:50 AM   #2
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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damn no feed...i aint gonna leave u hangin son...

beat is ok..chorus is meh...

vocals is a lil low..flow is straight..i think it woulda had a way betta feel if u just woulda talked regular..the lyrics is ok..a lil hard to hear..the chorus again..needs work..second verse..flow is still good..

overall work on the chorus...
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