Voted For: Macreep
umm this was a real close battle...
macreep: you had some decent personals punches hit, they were worded pretty decent, structure was alot better than unf's.
unf: ive seen you do alot better man, flow was all over the place as was the structure. the punches didn't really hit as hard as macreeps, they needed to be worded better which was a flaw in your verse. personals were ight.
ok time to break down the verses:
macreep:
he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition
^^ decent opener, hit ok
only when he bones a chick,then he thinks he's got a winning-thread
chose un-FUCK-widable,cause that how his girl think he is-in-bed
^^ lol nice namweplay decent bar
leader of reality check,but he's still begging for some respect ,da rueist
only way he gets some bows in front him was if his crew was buddist
^^umm kinda played but it was ight, one of the weaker bars though
in his crew,OMB's in the roster,but neva repped it,nor checked
so i guess ya'll diggs neglects...like ya had some destitude pets
^^ not feeling this one...
you started off decent then it got worse. overall not a bad verse but ive seen you do better.
unf:
When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu
Trust Me Youll Never Be Able To Handle The Verses I Send To U.....*
^^ ok opener didn't really hit
You Got Kicked From Ma Crew Now u Beefin?..... Whats The Deal Wit This Kid
You Think You Ill But U Shit .......Jus Another Trinidad Bitch Wit No Niche....**
^^ don't get it
Your Lyrics Dont Even Make Sense....You Gunna Blow?Fuck Off For Goodness Sake When...
I Tear Apart Rather Then Break Men....Your Only Action Iz In The State Pen..***
^^ didnt hit him hard really
This Bitch Usin Shit Rhymin Wit Shit.....The Timen Was Shit....
Im Grinden Ya Shit.....Im Too Good Stop Startin Beef U Should Go Back Ta Ridin My Dick...****
^^best bar in your verse
Im Shootin Wit Clips At You Trinidad Bitch ..You Should Duck N Roll I Fuck The Dull...
Hollow Stuck In Your Skull Ppl Laugh Wen u Roll.....Thas Enuff Then You Fold.....*****
^^ok i spose needed to be worded better though
Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....
^^ ok. didn't hit very hard though
I'll Finish Him Off.....Im Ill To But Im Not Gunna Send Him A Cough....
I Knew Youd Lose You Didnt Have To Stall......ALthough It Waz An Eazy Battle In All
^^ ok again, you need better cpncepts
(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...^^ i dno if this was a bar but it was weak lol
ok. ive seen you drop alot better than this, your wording wasn't good, same with your flow and structure thats y i aint voting for you.
v/ macreep
punches and personals were worded better, structure was set up better aswell.
pz