Sup ma you have elevated a lot since I was last on RV,....

Dam first thing you can see in this verse was the emotions
you can tell this is real its like the emotions just pour out of
the monitor.

Flowed really really well I see you have started using inners in
your lines now, it makes it rhyming better and adds more depth.

Vocab well on point, I liked this bar,.....
The suns blistering heat, kidnaps me, I’m at another place
Witnessing all my families faces, I hold them in an embrace

This was well nice ma stay up and keep writing...

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