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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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this was good, as they said structure needs work, but other than that it was pretty good, vocab was decent on both parts, felt both parts equally, flow was good, nice use of emotion on both parts, keep it up you two
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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