dat beat had potential...but who ever produced it didn't get the most out of it...it cudda be KNOCKIN 4 real

ur flow and delivery work for it

however, ur Hook sounds contrived...

i think hookd shud be simple...like one main idea and repeat over and over

almost like a chant...jus my opinion


pretty good track tho


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