whats up i been absent for a lil bit due to alot of personal problems this is a song i decided to record due to me and my girl breakin up a while back and i've missed her since and i had to get this off my chest......


www.bandspace.com/traidmarx


1st song

come on people drop a fuckin reply...

dat beat had potential...but who ever produced it didn't get the most out of it...it cudda be KNOCKIN 4 real

ur flow and delivery work for it

however, ur Hook sounds contrived...

i think hookd shud be simple...like one main idea and repeat over and over

almost like a chant...jus my opinion


pretty good track tho


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

wow, very, very, very impressive. this is the kind of track i like. absolutely luvin the beat, is that urs or sum1 elses, if so wot beat is it???? anywayz yer as tha Q sed your flow's definetely on point for this, and you ride the beat really well.
decent track right there. 9.5/10

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thanks for checkin out....

love da fuckin beat...for REAL thaz my kinda style of beat yo hook it up? were u get it from? kuzz that shitz hot

yo ur flow is tite...u take a hell lot of breathz during the track which fuckz up ya flow big time and takes up time when u rhyme...the feeling is dere u have emotion behined ya wordz and thaz some real shit

yo imma harsh person so imma be even more Real

u shoulda had someone help u on this...not saying u needed a collab but someone to do ur chorus kuzz ur deep breath u took during the hook is heard more then ur verse so yea u shoulda had someone else do ur hook...tha chorus is hot tho but ur voice is kinda dry but eh hot enuff

honestly

i like that track seriously id prolly bump it all day

so keep up da good work and learn how to control ur breathing k?

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Get At Em'

yea i wish i coulda got someone to sing on it or at least do back up vocals

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