nice Mizz......Emotion was deep an ya imagery was top notch too, Wasnt feelin the length of your peice, maybe could of stretched it for 6-10 lines more...cause while it was creative an a good read, I felt some parts of your verses you could of worked on a little more an gone into a little more detail, dunno if you understand? but ah well, 8.5/10.....real nice drop Mizz...

Now tell me somthin, when you can drop like this, Why concentrate your talents on some loved out bullshit thats corny as the movie dances with wolves?.....

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