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love da fuckin beat...for REAL thaz my kinda style of beat yo hook it up? were u get it from? kuzz that shitz hot
yo ur flow is tite...u take a hell lot of breathz during the track which fuckz up ya flow big time and takes up time when u rhyme...the feeling is dere u have emotion behined ya wordz and thaz some real shit
yo imma harsh person so imma be even more Real
u shoulda had someone help u on this...not saying u needed a collab but someone to do ur chorus kuzz ur deep breath u took during the hook is heard more then ur verse so yea u shoulda had someone else do ur hook...tha chorus is hot tho but ur voice is kinda dry but eh hot enuff
honestly
i like that track seriously id prolly bump it all day
so keep up da good work and learn how to control ur breathing k?
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