intro is dope... waaay too long though you shuuda had it bout 10 secs its till goin on.. deffo shorten it, am losing interest now.....

iite here we go.. beat is kool. vocals are low. hard to hear you. quality is better though. emotion is iite could be better. flow needs a bit of work as does your breath controllit really sounds like your whispering...

up your vocals and emotion, work on your delivery and flow.

then se how good you are. good job though... pretty decent. better than your others

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