Thread: Death Row
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Old 08-23-05, 01:20 PM   #7
Dizzee Rascal
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Ayo return favour on my piece ight??
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...883#post2386883

well ur piece,
Yeah was a nice lil piece, def got ur flow down i feel though u could enhance it by throwing mad multis that aint mono syllabic all around the piece instead of just some normal multis nah mean??

Sentenced ta 2 years on death row its set so
Why not die now end my life now just let go

Fav bar of the piece

Def some nice emotion and imagery in perhaps some similes coukd enhance it 2
ayo respect
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