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Death Row
IP: 0825 899A
Confused trapped in a sensless state of mind One of a kind cant be defined running out of time Sentenced ta 2 years on death row its set so Why not die now end my life now just let go Set free of the demons put my life ta peace Not worth living knowing no chance of release Life cut short dying is my constant thought My life is coming to a stop just cuz I was caught Trapped behind these bars for my last site of life No reason to complain no reason to put up a fight The pain will end soon as the line gets shorter I have no set bail thanks to the court order Death is a heavy sentence get you thinking a lot How life can come to an end then ur life is forgot Im not proud of what I did or glad that it happened Jail had got me thinkin common sence has snapped in This cell that im trapped in has got outsiders laughin The day of my death has come settle me down with rum People pay to see my death, seeing me die for fun? Down to my last breath strapped in ready for death As I replay the memories of how I got in this mess They insert the poision I feel it entering my body I have no other thoughts other than I truly am sorry *STOPS BREATHING IS NOW DEAD*
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IP: 0BC7 D5A8
wow..... im actually impressed
really felt emotion and had great imagery i felt like i was in prison with him and i was there when he got killed damn.. 8/10.. best yet by far.. keep it up
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IP: 0825 899A
^^thanks man much appreciated fo reall still uppin for more feed
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IP: 3240 794D
still uppin for proper feed...dont sleep on this people
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
yo dont sleep fam, drop some feed!
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Middle Weight
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Ayo return favour on my piece ight??
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...883#post2386883 well ur piece, Yeah was a nice lil piece, def got ur flow down i feel though u could enhance it by throwing mad multis that aint mono syllabic all around the piece instead of just some normal multis nah mean?? Sentenced ta 2 years on death row its set so Why not die now end my life now just let go Fav bar of the piece Def some nice emotion and imagery in perhaps some similes coukd enhance it 2 ayo respect 1 |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
much appreciated^^still uppin
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IP: 0825 899A
upping...........god
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IP: 3240 794D
finally lol thanks man
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
no doubt no doubt still uppin
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IP: 0E16 AA2D
this was good, imagery and emotion were really good, flow and structure were good, was really feelin this man, keep em coming
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![]() i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
thanks man appreciate it!!
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