now for all yall trying to douse torch and crumble this cookie FUCK you we some super ganstaz and yall just sit back and read this shit

TORCH OREO

I Put The Torch To Your Face Man, Now That's Some X-Men
I Wreck When I Step In The Ring, Watch The Steel Flex An
Scratch You With A Mask On, Like Wolverine An Cyclops
Torch Your Face Down, Next You'll Be Needing Eye Drops
It's The Calm Before The Storm, Bullet's Man I'll Use It
Don't Abuse It, Cause We'll Have You On The Movement
I'll Fly By Spitting Flame's Like A Dragon And Super Man
Don't Trip, I'll Break Every Bone In You Like You Roofing Fam
Look Man, I'll Karate Kick You, Dog But I Aint Lu Kang
I'll Split You With A Razor, Leave You In Two Mang
And On Top Of That, I'll Leave Your Flopping Like A Fish
A Bullet's Sends Sonya, Aint No One Topping That Kiss



the fruit aint gotta split to watch the bananas peel
hes the hoods clark kent torch is the man of steel
his name gots the block hot,go head and stop drop
now yall cock block with more hands than dock ock
his trigger finger ae hurtin,bleedin and throbbin
a thief, so fuck a batman my sidekick is Robin
its not gonna take much to take care of ya
R.v walks with the Shield like Captain Amercia
gats light storm, flashin and lightnin the techs man
even gots Proffesor Xavier poppin the X-men
this my team so dont get touch with that red beam
leavein metal fragments in your body like wolverine

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2391438
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205845

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HaHa Fuckers We're Here Now!

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Need Feed
Lord, Forgive Me Ft Sabotage
Something Like That-Ft Torch
Summer Nights-Ft Troch
Super G's Ft Oreo

The Council
We'll Make You Eat Your Words.
Plus We've Got Ho's.

uppin...lookin for some feed

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good i guess but wtf superheroes nooo lol

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whats wrong with super heros?? i cant get creative...its borin so use the same stlye over and over

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ehhhh it was ight had some played out but ight metaphors in here...structure was good...flow was decent i could read without havin ta go back a sentence...ur rhyme scheme was a lil played out but overall it was decent better than some catz i seen on here..and even though u had an attempt ta make it original it had an old old old topic every person almost talks bout on this site....gunz, gatz, heaters, etc....that shit is so played out mayn....be more original...truth is u probably never even touched a gun in ur life so please dont bring that shit to the net it'll just make u look like an e-thug....maybe u do have that shit but please find sumthin else ta rap bout...gunz are so boring ta hear bout nowadayz..but overall it was a decent o.m....keep it up and keep elevating....7.5/10

thanks i guess...um yeah i have.....but i dont really brag on it...just having fun damn

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yo oreo are u half black and half white or sumthin...and empty ur pms i was gon send this too u but ur thangs full

im pure white...this is what they call me in my neighborhood so its been my rap name since i started

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oh werd..........