who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
^^ok wordplay but could've been used better
UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
^^hehe, ok
i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
^^attempted wordplay not really logical, nice try tho
F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won..
^^nah, unless there's some personal I'm not getting
vs.
Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
^^ok, but not too original, nice flow tho
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
^^played, but ok, but don't explain punches! If they need explaining they're worded badly or not based on public info
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
^^heh, ok punch, but ya rhymed the same word = bad
.:: Finish It ::.
Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
^^kinda stupid wordplay, no diss
if I could vote it'd be v/apostrophe
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