This was great. The opening really showed how much of a sweet person you are. It mentioned some personal events in your life which is always good. The emotion was great, the wording and flow was even good.(surprised since most om's lack in this area). The part about your dad was sad. Hope you dealing with that okay. The line about why can't some things be everlasting. I wonder that too. I really hope you turn audio soon. Cause I honestly believe you can do it. Good job.