uhmm, word up..woulda been cool if you had mad knight as the other person, you know?

but whatever, still worked, MK, uhmm, flow was choppy a lil.....not too big of a deal though, don't use so much commas, when you do, that obstructs alot......not bad though, liked your other ones more though......keep writing

MF, word, told very much like a story, very involving, good job, keep up,,,,,you know what you're doing

rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206108

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