Excellent concept first of all, the ending reminds me of a piece I once wrote.

You worked it out very nicely, speaking on several aspects of being an angel and how they are perceived by mortals. The imagery was great, you used clear pictures to describe the theory in your words. The emotion was there as well, focusing on the tears and the pain of the angels, how they are not appreciated and such. The vocab was on point, had a good complexity to it all, flow was good!

Favor is returned...

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