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Old 08-31-05, 12:57 AM   #24
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Voted For: Jack The Ripper

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture
LOL @ msn, “Soc was dissing me in LL, Jack what do I do!?”
The kid really can’t take a joke, unless it’s from a site or two
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

vs.

I'ma re-kill Jack the Ripper, hope it don't go causin' riots
Man, you gon be losin', weight, but I ain't say you gonna dieyet
Your tourney spits sucked, don't wanna be a beef starter
But no wonder you look like Luke....
............................................. it's plain to see you got no farther!!
My lines are so ill, ain't no way you robbin' them
Leave you Spurrin' wit a 5-0 on your chest like Robinson

this was a real good battle...... i liked Jacks wordplay and wording better to begin with so his punches were more effective..... altho the whole "joke lines" on him are kinda played, i think JTRs flip on it was the best one i have seen Period. even tho i doubt that Spul is israeli, it was decent wordplay...... and i didnt see much filler without wordplay and a well connectin punch

Spul also had a some good concepts but i dont like ur wording.... the punches never really hit that hard for me except ur opener and closer.... those were the bars i felt u had worded the best altho they really werent ur best overall bars.... altho u didnt have much filler, i felt that JTR outdid u by alil bit on most bars..... each one of his hit just alil harder and the joke line, along with the "cheat again" line pretty much took it for me in the end

goodluck to the both of ya

V/JTR
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