Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
BARZ OF STEEL
........................................Man who the fuck is lying to you?? *
You're just a fucking crazy punk, who's too hard to face he sucks
Another white kid from the burbs....................riding Shady's nuts
^Nice personal hit hard and got to the point6/10^
So how the fuck are you bad in a verse???? This cat is the worst
I mean he's been here over a year...And still enjoys battling herbs **
^ouch thats gutta hurt.......good diss 5/10^
You've been nothin from the get go, now u sayin' you the best? No..
I mean the only time that "Hood's Hot" is a "Summer In The Ghetto" ***
^Liked how u arranged ur words still think diss was weak 4/10^
So why even try to pretend this guy is the shit? You might as well quit
Because my verse is sure to leave you "Inside Out" Like "That Guy In Ya Sig" ****
^good closer very nice personal/diss 8/10^
overall u had good structure flow and hard hitting punches and personal very fresh and original nothing played and was all intact which is why you had the victory, no flaws in this battle
ALPHA ASSassin
fuck Barz of Steel you'll never have star appeal
even though u play wit more balls than shaq-o-neal
u have no skillz at all they lack fo real
^wow um...no, first 2 lines whack and played wit shaq....and the last line i felt a lil cassidy there....not creative 0/10^
so now this pussy bout ta get it next
go fuck effecx cuz thats the only way ur gettin sex
^weak just plain jabs.......4/10^
u gettin ran over like a 4-door sedan
cuz im takin down this soar whore 50 cent fan
^4-door ford=eminem...u just reworded it.....come up wit ur own lines......no diss 0/10^
ur just a fucked up 17 year old newbie
and a suck up little groupie
so just shut up cuz u aint gon do shit too me
^nope awfull closer didnt diss him just said he aint gunna beat u which he did 0/10^
overall i feel ur verse needs a lot of work, ur wordplay is mad simple....ur vocab is plain.....structure is awfulll....figured ud atleast no how to do that......ur lines was played and sorta copied from cassidy and eminem.....not very fresh or originalll keep elevatin.
v/.Barz Of Steel.
rtf in sig link honest vote