Battle Rules:

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-30-05 at 06:28 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Alpha Assassin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 06:00 PM.

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 06:00 PM.

fuck Barz of Steel you'll never have star appeal
even though u play wit more balls than shaq-o-neal
u have no skillz at all they lack fo real
so now this pussy bout ta get it next
go fuck effecx cuz thats the only way ur gettin sex
u gettin ran over like a 4-door sedan
cuz im takin down this soar whore 50 cent fan
ur just a fucked up 17 year old newbie
and a suck up little groupie
so just shut up cuz u aint gon do shit too me

Lmao At This Battle...


Posting his pic up on RV? Kid, what the fuck you tryin to prove??

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Originally Posted by Alpha Assassin Whatever I Know I'm Cute

........................................Man who the fuck is lying to you?? *
You're just a fucking crazy punk, who's too hard to face he sucks
Another white kid from the burbs....................riding Shady's nuts
So how the fuck are you bad in a verse???? This cat is the worst
I mean he's been here over a year...And still enjoys battling herbs **
You've been nothin from the get go, now u sayin' you the best? No..
I mean the only time that "Hood's Hot" is a "Summer In The Ghetto" ***
So why even try to pretend this guy is the shit? You might as well quit
Because my verse is sure to leave you "Inside Out" Like "That Guy In Ya Sig" ****

* Self explanatory...Look at his pic

** In his profile under occupation it says something about killing newbs

*** His old name was Hood Dawg

**** The guy in his sig's insides are pouring out of his body. (Inside out)


* http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/6...aimexposed3.jpg

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Lets get some votes on this shit..................

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

ROFL.. alpha got ripped... ummm Alpha try using metaphors.. that arent played.. Barz ur verse was weak.. but still hot enough to take Alpha..umm barz ur flow was on.. i could actually read this to a beat and it sounded good.. Alpha the only actual punch u threw was the shaq line.. which is played as fuck... umm.. Barz you really should stop explaining ur punches.. as intelligent voters normally understand them.. soo no hate to either Barz just took this for harder hitting punches/personals/flow/and structure.. pretty much took all category's.. v/BOS

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My Lines Are ILL yo

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Uppin This Fucking Shit...

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Oh My Fucking God...

Let's Get Some Fucking Votes!!!

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

lmao at this...anyways barz got this battle hands down he had better punches personals structure was aiight other dude had no real good punches lacked personals etc...overall barz got this...pz

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Y.ou Know My Style 20 Niggas Wit 40 Cals

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

BARZ OF STEEL

........................................Man who the fuck is lying to you?? *
You're just a fucking crazy punk, who's too hard to face he sucks
Another white kid from the burbs....................riding Shady's nuts
^Nice personal hit hard and got to the point6/10^
So how the fuck are you bad in a verse???? This cat is the worst
I mean he's been here over a year...And still enjoys battling herbs **
^ouch thats gutta hurt.......good diss 5/10^
You've been nothin from the get go, now u sayin' you the best? No..
I mean the only time that "Hood's Hot" is a "Summer In The Ghetto" ***
^Liked how u arranged ur words still think diss was weak 4/10^
So why even try to pretend this guy is the shit? You might as well quit
Because my verse is sure to leave you "Inside Out" Like "That Guy In Ya Sig" ****
^good closer very nice personal/diss 8/10^

overall u had good structure flow and hard hitting punches and personal very fresh and original nothing played and was all intact which is why you had the victory, no flaws in this battle


ALPHA ASSassin

fuck Barz of Steel you'll never have star appeal
even though u play wit more balls than shaq-o-neal
u have no skillz at all they lack fo real
^wow um...no, first 2 lines whack and played wit shaq....and the last line i felt a lil cassidy there....not creative 0/10^
so now this pussy bout ta get it next
go fuck effecx cuz thats the only way ur gettin sex
^weak just plain jabs.......4/10^
u gettin ran over like a 4-door sedan
cuz im takin down this soar whore 50 cent fan
^4-door ford=eminem...u just reworded it.....come up wit ur own lines......no diss 0/10^
ur just a fucked up 17 year old newbie
and a suck up little groupie
so just shut up cuz u aint gon do shit too me
^nope awfull closer didnt diss him just said he aint gunna beat u which he did 0/10^

overall i feel ur verse needs a lot of work, ur wordplay is mad simple....ur vocab is plain.....structure is awfulll....figured ud atleast no how to do that......ur lines was played and sorta copied from cassidy and eminem.....not very fresh or originalll keep elevatin.

v/.Barz Of Steel.

rtf in sig link honest vote

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

just checking the poll......................................since i cant vote....cause of the 200post limit rule....fuckin bums......rtf on my battles dudes

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I dont RTF unless you vote.

Shut Up.

Uppin This Shit Thru The Ceiling...

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