damn.................. i gotta say this shit iz crazy........ not like tight/fresh/kool crazy either. if i knew who u were and saw u on the street i'd run........ now for your poem. believe it or not, from a writing stand point it wasn't that bad. good structure, and ummm imagery.......... that's all i really have to say on this one....... 8.5/10 overall

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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