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Old 08-31-05, 04:55 AM   #1
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Sliced off my mamma's hand and kept it as a pet.
Decapitated all her limbs and collected the whole set.

Killed my girl and danced with her dead body.
Whispered in her here ear, told her she was a true hotty.

My shotty was jammed, i raped her and scraped her against the ground.
She was dead though, so she didn't make a sound.

Take both their bodys and bury them in the tomb underneath my house.
Go back upstairs, no more bickering and bitching, everything is as quite as a mouse.
I still hear screams throught the house.

Douse it in flames, burn it to the ground.
Now i don't hear a fucking sound.


I'm stuck in a trance, as i watch the flames flicker and dance.

Watching them wave from side to side.
Run away from the scene, gotta find a place to hide.
Killed my wicked mother, and my soon to be bride.

I think this will end in lifetime some how, some way.
For now this murderer got away.
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Old 08-31-05, 09:58 PM   #2
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damn.................. i gotta say this shit iz crazy........ not like tight/fresh/kool crazy either. if i knew who u were and saw u on the street i'd run........ now for your poem. believe it or not, from a writing stand point it wasn't that bad. good structure, and ummm imagery.......... that's all i really have to say on this one....... 8.5/10 overall
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