Voted For: Vaskez

Fat bastard wanted lunch before he checked in to post his verse
I'd smack his chin, but gotta figure out which one to hit first

This was a nice punch, I've seen that kind of concept flipped many times before though

I'ma make this bitch hurt, quick to diss flabby gits after checkin
Started writing when I saw Wayne in...at 300 pounds was this cretin

This was real nice as well, good wordplay and good punch

Never met 'im, but we expect Wayne to drop wack in confrontations
Dumbass has "stand up" in his location...
............................but still falls short of expectations

Not bad, didn't make all that much sense though

Battle has many connotations, for me, there's only the win to gain
And if I was facing the loss........I'd just turn my back on Wayne

Nice wordplay again. A real good verse so far

Ya got no game and like to capitalise your rhymes like a beginner
While I just capitalise on your wackness to emerge as the winner

Filler, didn't like it at all, too simple

Even in 'er, ya girl says all she ever sees is you shrinking, shame
Even the dictionary agrees: "decrease in size"=definition of Wane

lmao, that was pretty hot, good stuff


I smoke any that diss us we get to CLAPPIN-THE-STENCILS I POPING-U-PIMPLES i'll put a "END TO YALL MANUSKRIPTS' by fuckn SNAPING-YALL-PENCIALS

Good multi's, no real punch, and fuck your structure is horrible

bitch this RAPING-IS-SIMPLE you all out of PLACE u CRAZY-DISGRACE I bust on "YA MOMS WILL TAKE CUMSHOTS" and call her BABY-FACE!!

I'm gonna exclude saying good multi's, as I probably will in every line, so weak punch

im DEMANDING-YA-HOES u cant OUTSTAND-ME-YA-KNO? cuz ppl feel frozen (aka Vaskez in the hood ) like they was STANDING-IN-SNOW

Wordplay was alright, bit simple though, no real punch

leave u bleeding and UNSTABLE-WHEN-GLOCK-HITS- im a don u not ABLE-TO-POP-THIS cuz the flow send off "STATIC" like fucked up CABLE-BOXES

I liked the cable boxes wordplay, no punch again

nothing but VENOM-SPITS come out of these LIPS bullets tear flesh intill ya fuckn DENIM-RIPS cuz im fuckn up ya "NERVES" like im giveing the DENTIST-TIPS death will BEND-YA-LIPS and TENTET-BITCH if ya bitch open her legs ima be "LIKE A ANAL" i'll be IN-THE-SPLITS

Fuck almighty, this was stretched terribly, and no punch either

Vaskez had a real hot verse, it would of had to have taken something real nice to beat that. Wayne, you need to get a decent structure cos your verse was one of the most stretched I've ever seen, good multi's though, also try and hit hard with punches.

v/ Vaskez

Wayne, could you drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206973