Thread: Death Row
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Old 09-05-05, 11:02 PM   #29
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....this peice surprised me.Good shit here..Flowed stayed good throughout the whole thing.Vocab could be upped a notch.was a lil bland .I Liked the concept..the whole jail thing is sumtin I could relate to.LoL....Imjery/emotion..shit was good.Just upp ur vocab.

Overall-8.5
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