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Old 09-06-05, 02:37 PM   #51
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Tony-aiight man you had good imagry but i felt you didnt stay to the meanin of the topic...but you had some emotion not much and you didnt have much vocab...i felt you iddnt come at this with your best you had decent flow and an aiight story but it didnt go along with the topic well enough to me....next time come harder and stay on topic and use better vocab .....5/10

onestep-aiight wasnt the best ive seen from you but i felt you conveyed the topic better cuz you kept the meanin in your drop.....you had vocab it wasnt excessive but it was enough for this drop....you had more emotion in your piece than tony and twards the end you see it more which made your piece a better read.......you had some imagry but not too much but it was a nice drop 7/10
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