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| Tony Green |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
| OneStepBeyond |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
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08-22-05, 03:12 PM
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Skadoosh!
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Tony Green vs OneStepBeyond
IP: 2EF7 66B7
Battle Rules:
15-30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No Dickriding No Bullshit TOPIC: Home Is Where The Heart Is. Crew Battle: The Establishment vs. Trigga Town Inc. Declining The Battle = Automatic Loss. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 08-24-05 at 03:12 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
 
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08-23-05, 01:08 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Tony Green has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 01:08 PM.
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08-23-05, 02:53 PM
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IP: AB23 98FF
OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 02:53 PM.
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08-23-05, 02:54 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
20 minute scribble!!!!
Beautiful... Picture an angel... Flying and singing, Now different the angle, shes actually disguised as a demon, Every single thing dangles, helplessly, crying and screamin, None of this was love... You said it just denying the meanin, Dictionary for us... A few words, You were lieing the feelin, Livings crazy just cause I can't when I'm trying to leave and, Your heart was open to me, then you changed the deadbolt, Just when I was hoping to leave, I got afraid and then thought, How would I live without someone I had for 11 months in all, When my living quarters I can't stand and in your arms i'm comfortable, Puzzle? Changing won't fix, Theres some sections a mess, Peices rearranged and won't fit, and it lessens my breath, You said you question the rest when all you said was "love you, What would I do without you?" Seems you'd live life with no trouble, I've lost a cause. just lost my balls was I was trying to leave, "I've never felt this way," Never been filled with lies and deceit? The rain pouring from the skies, they symbolize my tears, Only show my anger and pain....... to disguise my fear, Looking for salvation..... and until I realize its here, I'll hide behind my music till the skies are clear, Never been the one to stray far from home cause those deny me, But my passion for you is burning like an inferno deep inside me, And now I learn my home has been broken into, truth is unvaled, Stealing what is rightfully mine, and the intruders a male, Everything I once knew has been stripped of how I knew it, Take the pain from my mind, have it shifted through my music, I'm insane all the time, see the pain been through, Cause what was love to me was just a game to you, Home is where the heart is, and just when I'm about to leave, I realize my hearts with you... And I've lost the key.... Kind of a shitty way to do the topic but it was already shit on my mind so I worked with it. Oh well... G/L Tony.
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08-23-05, 03:32 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
God had to make a decsion, was life even worth giving. Thats why the heart is the place were your conscious is living. I had to make a choice between <a href='http://www.consumeralertsystem.com/cas/zx-hclick.php?hid=268' target='_blank'>music</a> and my heart. Which one I'm aprat my life fast as go karts.... Lookin at my peers I couldn't find me an answer. I'm living out my dream but moms dying of Breast Cancer. I had a phone call with her last night she was alright. Said that she needed me home I took the first flight. We sat down poured some coco up in the glass. Remembering the past from the good times to the bad. She looked at me smiled and said son you made it. No matter how much they may hate it, you one of the worlds greatest My cell rang... manager sayin we got a meeting. Couldn't think about leavin had to make sure momma was eating. But I didn't I packed up my bags and hit the studio. If I had of stayed would life be diffrent who really knows. I got call from my manager again that night. Sayin we sold out the garden hit New York first flight. But I'm still thinkin I left my mother would I regret it. Was dark paths headed at the end will tears be shedded. I made 6 figures the concerts going on..... The only connection to my sickly mother is my <a href='http://www.consumeralertsystem.com/cas/zx-hclick.php?hid=121' target='_blank'>cell phone</a>. So I gave it to my manager said answer all calls. If I'm on stage performing tell secruity get me off. Don't know what heppened that day was round 7 or 8. My moms called my phone and my manager told her to wait. I aint even know she called till I got to my flight gate. And when I returned the call doctor said it was to late.......... *The moral of this piece is if I had followed my heart and went home then maybe my moms would still be thier* |
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08-23-05, 03:34 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
Nice drop OSB uppin to the top......................
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08-23-05, 04:23 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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This was feedback posted for Tony Green
IP: 8C42 DC70
Owned.............................................
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08-23-05, 04:29 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: E2F9 A45B
Checking this out.....................................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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08-23-05, 04:35 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
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D/R everyone had something positive to say except you fuck outta my face lil ass kid! |
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08-23-05, 05:21 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
I'll have to give this to OneStepBeyond because he had better imagery. Tony Green had a better approach to the topic, but the wording didn't seem to catch my attention and it seemed to be all monotonous to me. Some things seemed rushed about OSB's piece, like Quote:
Which is worded in a way that doesn't make sense. I could feel OSB's piece more though, even if it was half-assed. |
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08-23-05, 05:25 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanxx for the vote uppin to the top...............
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08-23-05, 06:29 PM
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Skadoosh!
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: 2EF7 66B7
checkin da pollz........................................:cool :
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08-24-05, 03:10 AM
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: A0C8 44A9
Nice drop my friend. I think that you took this one. Good job..
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08-24-05, 03:12 AM
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: A0C8 44A9
Dope drop man. Nice verse, way to bring one home for the crew.
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08-24-05, 08:42 AM
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: A0C8 44A9
Dope drop my friend. Way to bring one home for the crew.
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