ok bone collector from reading your other peices this is ssssooooo much better your flow was good on this becasue you didnt have stretched lines like in your other verses
your vocab wasnt as good but i could relate to this much better
the hook was good whoever wrote it i was feeling it
axel ive never read your stuff befor bbut you were pretty good good flow imagery everything hope to see more from you
props to boith best ive seen from bone

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