This was a deep piece man,the structure was perfect...very easy to follow...

First things,the emotion was amazing...always the most important thing in a topical piece to me and you hit it spot on...made me want to keep reading...

The creativity was good also...you worked the out the topic well...great imagery...you made a good lil story out of it...i was deffinetely feeling this..

Also your vocab was on point in most places...i always love good vocab...and you used it well...

Overall dope piece...u a good topical head..keep em coming..and get at me for a collab.

wun

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